A. M. Green

Thanks! This helps a lot :) I think I'll go with this prologue instead of the other one. AMGreen

Ok everyone. From all of you guys who have read what I have posted of Shift, I want you to tell me which beginning is better. This one: Prologue Don’t ...

Thanks everyone for you're help. I think I see what I'm doing wrong now. AMGreen

Hey everyone. I am currently writing a novel called Shift (if you want to read it, you'll find the prologue and the first three chapters under the science fiction forum)and ...

Chapter 3 I felt someone jab me in the stomach, and I opened my eyes, only to see Angela. A worried look captivated her pale face, and I could see ...

I thought it was quite interesting, and you're right, it's not exactly the type of story I usually read, BUT I really liked it! It was different, and that's what ...

Chapter 2 As soon as I left the house, I took off running. Tears blinded my vision, but I kept on going strong. It was true that I had been ...

Thanks. I am posting up more chapters now. AMGreen

Thank you guys! I really appreciate all you're help and suggestions. I am posting the next chapters that I have done right now, so please read! Thanks again. AMGreen

Chapter 1 The blinding sun shone through my window, casting a bright light on my face. I squinted, threw the covers off of my body, stood up, and prepared for ...

Thanks, I really appreciate that. I totally agree with you on description and stuff like that. My main goal right now is to get the story down, then edit it ...

Thanks Cheezit! I really appreciate it. I've done a couple of short stories, but this is my first attempt at a novel. I'll be posting more soon! AMGreen

Prologue “We have come to a decision.” A dramatic pause hung in the air. “We hereby declare that Shifters, will be banished from Planet Earth.” Shouts of anger rose from ...